Writing and the Permission to Succeed: The Intersection of Art and Shame

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Writing and the Permission to Succeed: The Intersection of Art and Shame

Interviewer: You mentioned getting permission to write. Who gave it to you?
Morrison: No one. What I needed permission to do was succeed at it.

In a Fall 1993 Paris Review “The Art of Fiction” interview, Elissa Schappell spoke with Toni Morrison about the writing life. Morrison talked about writing while holding down a full-time job as an editor, writing with small children in the house, writing as a woman, writing as a woman of color, writing about controlling one’s own characters (and not), writing about sex (“It’s just not sexy enough”). Morrison talked also about the weapons of the weak: nagging, poison, gossip. And about permission to write, and permission to succeed at it.
I read those words and had a sticky, squirmy reaction: I felt the way I do when I stand back and witness the horror of someone else’s undoing. It’s a tight kink in the stomach; a hard walnut in the throat. We’ve all been there, haven’t we? We’ve seen the speaker who loses the words. The young actor who blanks out on stage. The musician who forgets the chords. The writer — the food writer, science writer, the academic, the novelist — blocked by fear. We wince. Who are they to even try? some whisper as we watch them tumble from their place.
When it comes our time, we become that person, naked on the stage: doubtful, panicky, assured by the nagging, the poison, the gossipy gremlin chatter over our shoulders, promising that we too, will most certainly, most definitely fail.

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I have spent the last eighteen months writing a memoir. For a long while, I worked as a cookbook editor. I wrote on the train in longhand scribbles, at night in my pajamas, during lunch breaks, on the weekend, until it became clear to me that it I had to step away from one job or the other. After much hand-wringing, the decision was made: I relinquished my position tearfully. I loved it and was good at it — I had long ago been given permission to succeed at being an editor — and went home to my office and closed the door, and wrote.

I did what all the books and my writing teachers say you’re supposed to do: I put my ass in my chair every morning at 8:30, and apart from doing yoga a few times a week, walking the dogs, and making myself endless cups of tea, I didn’t move. Some days the work flowed like a river. Some days I stared at the page — each word I managed to eke out was like squeezing the back end of an elephant through the eye of a needle — and wept. Alone. And I asked myself the same thing I asked while I was writing my first memoir.

Do I have the permission to succeed at this? Who am I to tell my stories?

“Who are you to not tell them?” a writer friend said to me. This writer friend — author of novels, memoirs, a short story collection — tells me that it is ownership, the acceptance of the fact that our stories make us who we are, that is the most complicated and treacherous part of what we do. When that ownership is withheld, we cannot succeed. When other forces say, no, that story is not yours, they have not only killed it and its place in your soul; they have killed you.
There are plenty of hurdles in the writing process: distraction, diligence, envy, arrogance, dedication, time, space, money, nagging, poison, gossip. There is the seductive conceit that lures you, like an animal into a trap, towards the belief that your work is spectacular, whatever that means, long before your work is actually done. There’s the quicksand of self-doubt so immobilizing that you can’t climb out of it, and the more you struggle, the deeper you get sucked in. Writing is balance. Mrs. Ramsay was right.

A light here requires a shadow there.

The hurdles can make you think you’re better-or-worse-than. They can shut you down, prop you up, alter your course, tack your sails. They can result in moments of bliss and terror, calm and panic, hubris and humility, pomposity, paranoia, and paralysis. Often within moments of each other.
These obstacles may hinder permission to write, but they don’t withhold permission to succeed at it. The rickety, splintering plank connecting the two, as quavery as a rope bridge over a gorge, is reserved strictly for shame.
“You don’t think shame,” says Janna Malamud Smith. “You feel covered in its viscose grime. The great hand immerses you whenever you are told you are, or believe yourself to be, violating a basic communal code.”

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Truth: A well-known food writer tells me that no matter what she writes — her blog, her cookbooks, her endless articles — she is filled with paralyzing shame. “My mother,” she tells me, her eyes filling with tears, “is the family cook. I was supposed to be the lawyer.” When she won her first cookbook award, her mother asked, Who do you think you are? Every time the writer sets pen to paper, she is overcome with guilt and anguish. Every recipe is poisoned with the pang of resentment. “I will never be a success,” she says to me. “It would kill her.”

Truth: An artist in her fifties has devoted her life to creating bright, colorful pencil drawings. It’s a nice hobby, her parents say, but your sister is the real artist. Why didn’t you become a teacher the way we hoped? Forever mired in disappointment — hers, theirs — her images are the same ones she drew when she was eleven, stuck in time and place, like their creator, longing for approval, waiting for permission.
Truth: A writer tells the story of something that happened to her late father almost a century earlier. The story, one of abandonment, is inherently cloaked in shame. Haunted by this myth, which feels almost Greek, this writer and her worldview have been molded and shaped by it since she was a child; it forever transforms her sense of safety and self. She writes her story and is expelled by her family, who has kept it a secret for nearly a hundred years. Who do you think you are to write about this? they say.
Malamud Smith writes:

“Shame is a group survival reflex in which the individual is an afterthought. Shame’s first goal is to have you confirm to group expectations. Art-making is a profound way people deal with shame. One way art transforms [it] is by replacing helplessness with agency.”

Like Morrison, we look beyond ourselves for the permission to succeed. This external yearning for that which is granted by someone or something else, something outside ourselves, is instilled in us from infancy and metabolized like mother’s milk. May I, can I, should I. To disregard it is to step into thicket and thorn. To flout shame, to poke it in the eye, is to invite abandonment. As writers and artists, we depend upon the external to feed us after our solitary days at work. To violate that compact feels like sure death. In truth, it is life.
“Know your own bone,” Dani Shapiro quotes from Thoreau in her Woolfian Still Writing. Gnaw at it, bury it, unearth it, gnaw it still.

“In order to do what we love — whether we are woodworkers, legal-aid attorneys, emergency room physicians, or novelists — we must first know ourselves as deeply as we are able. Know your own bone. This self-knowledge can be messy. But it is at the center of our life’s work, this gnawing, this unearthing. There is never an end to it. Our deepest stories — our bones — are our best teachers. Gnaw it still.”

Quiet the noise around you; soften its pitch. Our deepest stories are our best teachers. Let the weapons of the weak — the poison, the nagging, the gossip — burn themselves to ash. Cast them to the wind. Take back the permission to succeed. Make it yours.

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is the author of the memoirs Treyf: My Life as an Unorthodox Outlaw and Poor Man’s Feast: A Love Story of Comfort, Desire, and the Art of Simple Cooking. She writes the regular Washington Post column “Feeding My Mother,” and the James Beard Award-winning blog Poor Man’s Feast. Her work has also appeared in the New York Times, Tin House, Oprah Magazine, and on the TEDx stage.

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